Sadness, that is flowing in my eyes,
Like the dream uncovered and unknown
Hard to catch, flying high in the sky;
I see the man from window;
Walks carrying the the loads
I thought I am the same;
Like him, all alone on the roads -
I ponder in blank;
If I could just catch the sight;
HE tells me not to lose,
I wonder! How & What do I choose;
Feeling of 'No-Return' is all around,
I have no voice, I can hear no sound;
It's all over!
What do you think I just wrote about? I do not know. I just let the words flow. If it's not ending, may be it is not meant to end.
hey Krupa.. well, nice poem.. And as u said, some things r never meant to end..Life's never a straight forwrd road, hai na? U encounter so many sharp twists n turns, that at times u r forced to ponder if the road was worth pursuing. But I'm pretty sure that one day, U'll hear voices all arnd u.. Let there be light! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Sam. Thanks for your thoughts. How did you come to my blog by the way?
ReplyDeleteI just wish I hear the voice soon about the fact that the road is worth pursuing. I hope I hear something.
Let me first decide what Road it is :-)
The poem indeed is straight from heart. I did not modify it a bit to rhyme.
Oops.. Sorry SAM - my dear Snehal.
ReplyDeleteSorry yaar tuje pehchan na saki.. :)
Welcome my reader! Be a regular reader ok? :)
Nice Poem !!! never thought u can become a poet !! keep up the good work !!
ReplyDeleteNice poetry!
ReplyDelete" The mind is closed, the eyes are shut,
ReplyDeleteAll I can see is a deserted small hut;
The space is crammed, the thoughts have jammed,
All fighting for breath alone I stand!
My legs are bonded,I feel so tied,
The heart is numb its just died,
Standing in a vast desert searching an oasis,
Only mirages and mirages is that I find,
Disoriented, directionless and meaningless,
The life just keeps going on and on,
So monotonous, so mechanical, so rhetoric,
It simply moves on and on !
I look for a path , I look for the destiny,
But only empty space is all I find,
I still await fighting lonliness and fate,
In hope that one I will find the freedom and direction that is only mine!
I thot words were not enuf.. A poetry for a poetry :)
And ur flow is gud , more important it is true .. Gud work keep it up ..
Soham -
ReplyDeleteSorry friend, But I don't think I am sure which Soham are you :-)
But thank you for the comment.
Bharath - Thanks.
Ravi - :-) Nice meaning of your poem. Afterall I am learning something from you.
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ReplyDeleteIn that case meri fees kahaan hai :P
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